Hump Day Hook No. 2 #HDH

Posted on 20 February 2013

Hi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my erotic romance story, Loose Ends:

I zoned out of Jenny’s inane chatter and stared into the middle distance. Suddenly, something moved into my line of sight that snapped me back into the land of the living. Or should I say someone.

“Fuck!” I exclaimed, gaining a disapproving look from Mrs. Busybody and puzzled ones from the girls.

“He’s fucking here!”

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16 Comments

Kathleen Grieve on 20 February 2013 at 10:29

Who? Who? So not fair!
Christina Cole on 20 February 2013 at 10:57

Good hook!
Sherry Gloag on 20 February 2013 at 11:46

Well 🙂 You’ve hooked me with this one.
Lacie Nation on 20 February 2013 at 11:46

Well way to leave me hanging! Nice hook.
Sarah Cass on 20 February 2013 at 14:08

Makes me want to know who’s there that could have elicited such a reaction!! Nice hook.
Angelica Dawson on 20 February 2013 at 15:37

That’s how to hook a reader. Who is it? Why does it bother her?
Jessica Subject on 20 February 2013 at 16:01

Who is it! Eek! Great hook! I’m pretty sure I already have this story on my Kindle. 🙂
Alexandra Anthony on 20 February 2013 at 16:15

Great hook! Wow…I want to know who she saw.
Flossie Benton Rogers on 20 February 2013 at 17:02

That would definitely snap her back to the land of the living. Now– what is he doing there??!
C.R. Moss on 20 February 2013 at 17:43

Great hook! Wondering who’s there! 🙂
Jade Crystal on 20 February 2013 at 19:11

Well, now, that just grabbed me attention. What in all the worlds could have elicited such a response? Great hook.
Elin Gregory on 20 February 2013 at 19:47

Who’s fucking here? 🙂 Great hook.
Ciaran Dwynvil on 20 February 2013 at 20:43

Who is there? We all need to know 🙂 Great hook!
meryvamp on 20 February 2013 at 22:04

Yes, I want to know who! And why does she sound so angry about it? I want more! Great job.
Catherine Green on 20 February 2013 at 23:13

Who’s here? That was short, snappy and I’m hooked!
Sabrina Devonshire on 20 February 2013 at 23:29

The guy must either be damn good looking or they have some kind of history for her to react this strongly!