Hump Day Hook No. 5 #HDH

Posted on 13 March 2013

Hi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my recently published erotic short story, Not Just Desserts, which appears in Smut for Chocoholics.

Bollocks. What the hell could she do? She’d been checking him out for quite some time now—his firm-looking arse, slim hips, bright blue eyes and smile to die for. He even had dimples—one of her weaknesses. He was seriously sexy. And that was before you even took into consideration his work attire. The rest of the staff wore black trousers and a uniform t-shirt with the pub’s logo emblazoned on it. He too, wore black trousers—which were not so tight as to be obscene, but tight enough to give the perfect view of his rear end—and a smart white shirt. Hilary was a sucker for a white shirt, too. Thankfully she didn’t go to too many funerals—crushing on someone while at a church service or burial would be wildly inappropriate.

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14 Comments

Jessica Subject on 13 March 2013 at 11:21

Sexy and funny! I absolutely love it! 🙂
Kerrianne Coombes on 13 March 2013 at 12:52

Dimples…*Swoon* LOL Fun hook x
Jessie Lansdel on 13 March 2013 at 14:52

Oh, great hook. Yes, white shirts are very sexy on a guy. Wonderful. ????
Flossie Benton Rogers on 13 March 2013 at 15:47

I like the sound of Hilary and defintely hope to see more of this cute, blue-eyed man. Nice hook!
Alexandra Anthony on 13 March 2013 at 16:41

Great descriptions…I’m properly hooked!
C.R. Moss on 13 March 2013 at 17:05

Love her thought pattern and the humor in your piece. Thanks for sharing. 🙂
C.R.
Rosalind Smith-Nazilli on 13 March 2013 at 17:52

That made me smile.. such wonderful language…xx
Sandra Sookoo on 13 March 2013 at 18:57

lol I love the “…not tight enough to be obscene…” And now I’m picturing Mick Jagger LOL But I loved the snippet 🙂
Frank Fisher on 13 March 2013 at 19:37

I love the last sentence – that really hooked me. I think he could ‘hook’ any woman with details like this.
Jade Crystal on 13 March 2013 at 20:39

Loved the last line! The hook was great, but the last line really made me giggle, trying to imagine someone ogling a hot guy during the eulogy or the graveside service, lol. I like the way she thinks…her thought processes seem to work like mine so it was easy for me to follow along, lol. Nicely done.
Mandy Earles on 13 March 2013 at 23:46

Gotta love dimples. Lovely descriptions. He definitely sounds tempting 😉
Lilly VanHorn on 14 March 2013 at 01:09

He sounds yummy! Now I’m super curious about him.
Ciaran Dwynvil on 14 March 2013 at 05:24

The last line made me chuckle. Nice hook!
Kathleen Grieve on 16 March 2013 at 10:03

Love the obsession of his arse! This snippet shows alot about her lustful cravings. Lol