Hump Day Hook No. 19 #HDH

Posted on 10 July 2013

humpdayhookHi everyone and welcome to Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. This week, I’m sharing a snippet from my femdom erotic romance novella, Testing Tomwhich is released on 30th July with Secret Cravings Publishing.

Katrina was halfway through an episode of her favorite drama series when her doorbell rang. She jumped, gasping as her heart lurched painfully, then pressed ‘pause’ on the remote control. Wincing slightly as she unfolded her legs from beneath her bottom—she’d been watching the program back-to-back for a couple of hours and she was stiff—she moved to the window and peered out through a gap in the curtains, careful not to let the mystery visitor see her, should she need to ignore them. Cold callers were common in her area, and drove her crazy. If she wanted to buy something, she’d contact them, not the other way around.

Want more? Of course you do! Here’s the page  for Testing Tom. And click here to go and visit the rest of the Hump Day Hook gang. Leave us comments about our pieces – we love it! 🙂

Happy Reading x

This entry was posted in Hump Day Hook

7 Comments

  1. Linda Hamonou

    Good, I have some of those knocking at the door too.
    I totally agree, if I needed something I would contact them.
    You set me right in the mood. 🙂

  2. Naomi

    I hope the visitor is someone pleasing to her and not a pesky cold caller. I hate those. Great hook.

  3. Jessica Subject

    I feel the same way about cold callers. Just had one yesterday that said I needed to upgrade my water heater. Anyway, that’s a great hook! I wonder if it’s really who she assumes at the door. 🙂

  4. Sarah Cass

    Oooh, who is at the door? Nice hook. (P.S. hate the cold callers too. lol

  5. Alexandra Anthony

    I want to know who’s at the door!

    Nice hook!

  6. Stevie Carroll

    I know how she feels about unexpected visitors.

  7. Alisha Robinson

    I wonder who’s at the door … and what it is they will try to sell her 😀

Submit a Comment

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *