Hump Day Hook No. 1 #HDH

Posted on 13 February 2013

Hi everyone! This is my first Hump Day Hook, which is basically where authors post a paragraph from a WIP or a published work to show it off to the world. So, I’m going to post my first hook from my recently published kinky lesbian tale, The Sweetest Revenge:

Abigail herself could be at Reception in under a minute from her desk, and would gladly be, if her presence was requested by the goddess Mackenzie. All she would have to do was click her fingers and Abigail would come running. And not just for a parcel. For whatever reason she damn well felt like giving.

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16 Comments

Paloma Beck on 13 February 2013 at 14:09

I dare say I wouldn’t mind being her. Great hook!
Jessie Lansdel on 13 February 2013 at 15:02

Ooh, now that’s power for you. Great hook. ????
Lacie Nation on 13 February 2013 at 15:56

Nice hook.
Jessica Subject on 13 February 2013 at 16:21

Abigail is putty in her hands. Great hook! 🙂
Adriana Kraft on 13 February 2013 at 16:31

OOoo, I love it when there’s a goddess involved…great hook!

Adriana
Colette Saucier on 13 February 2013 at 16:55

Heehee…. I read the hook without reading the set-up and thought, hmmmm….for sex maybe???
Yep! 😉
Flossie Benton Rogers on 13 February 2013 at 17:22

I see who has the power in this couple, very interesting. I want to know more about them for sure.
Gayle Ramage on 13 February 2013 at 17:27

Ooh, I wonder if she’s a real goddess or just what Abigail sees her as. Great hook!
Chantal Halpin on 13 February 2013 at 18:29

I wonder what those reasons might be!
Sandra Sookoo on 13 February 2013 at 18:47

Talk about power! Great hook!
Elin Gregory on 13 February 2013 at 21:15

The snapping fingers of power!! 🙂 Grand snippet.
Frank Fisher on 14 February 2013 at 03:14

Sounds like she’s got Abigail hooked (as well as me). Nice snippet.
Kerrianne Coombes on 14 February 2013 at 08:21

Nice hook!
Gem Sivad on 14 February 2013 at 14:48

A case of wish and command 😉
Delena Silverfox on 15 February 2013 at 20:58

Welcome to the hump! lol Glad to read a new Hooker!

Man, oh man, I’d love to be Mackenzie, for that kind of devotion!
Naomi on 18 February 2013 at 13:08

Ooh I’m hooked. I so want to know more